25th May 2008
Level C 3
Rating: ♦
“Nobody can take my memories away…
Nobody can take him away from me…
His love will never be broken, it will last forever…”
When we last left our two intrepid heroes we had Kazuomi showing his jealousy at Mizuki getting kissed by his classmate, Takanashi. Takanashi doesn’t like Mizuki. He has his own reasons for starting trouble with Mizuki and Kazuomi.
A few years ago, Kazuomi broke his sister’s heart. Sending her into a dream-like state where she waits for Kazuomi to come to her. Eventually, Kazuomi breaks her out of it by confronting her and letting her know that it is Mizuki that he truly loves. Which leads to rounds of hot, sweaty make-up sex.
So, once again, in the end, we’ve got Mizuki and Kazuomi screwing madly and not much else.
The plot is spread really thin in these books. I had to stop and re-read them for a third time because I could have sworn that the whole Mizuki/Kazuomi/Takanashi mess happened in one book, leaving room for a new plot device in volume three.
Nope. This flimsy plot got stretched between two books. Seriously, this series could have been compressed into one or two books. The main thing the characters do in the series is screw.
I’m sorry to say this, I’ll be turning in my pervert membership card later, but I’m just tired of watching these boys fuck. I want to see some real plot development. I don’t care about the characters in this series or want them to have everything work out so that they can live in happy smut-land. I don’t want them to have a happy ever after. I want to douse them both with cold water and tell them that there’s more to life than screwing.
The characters don’t even really argue. When they do, it’s in bed and it ends up with, you guessed it, more bedroom anticts. Damnit. I want plot. Where is my plot?
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